On a cursory read this is what I have found: Suggested Changes will be underlined. I hope this is clear enough.
Darryl
All top line page designators lead to where they say.
Homepage (About):
Clear
Donate Page:
Second paragraph “SURF was established in 1978… COMPLETED
Fourth paragraph “All funds donated are specifically to support…”
change to: “All funds donated support specifically research staff… ?????
Team Page:
Suggestions for Bio’s: Dr Paul Schellhammer – last paragraph : “Paul has served… as well as a trustee of the American Board of Urology and as its president
change to: …as well as president and former trustee of the American…COMPLETED
Medical Advisory Board Page:
Clear I assume that means all OK?
E2-I Team Publications Page:
2020 – 2024: First entry: Crawford, E. D. …
https:// entry goes to page 401 – Not Found. CHECK
Fifth entry
Palmer-Hague, J. L. …
https:// entry not found – check source. CHECK
Pre 2020:
Sixteen notations down : Wassersug, R. and Wibowo, E. PLUS following 8 entries Web Links are not set Because waiting for approval to use the APA format that searches for and links to the article/paper.
Publications by Others Page:
Koch, L. G. … https:// connects to wrong research SEE ABOVE re which APA format
Hawley, J. A. … https:// connects to wrong research SEE ABOVE re which APA format
Related News Page:
First four links are good;
Fifth shows 2 links which should be separated by a space or two but as they relate to a Covid protocol and an admission to a trial that has ended…Are they needed?Maybe something more recent??PAGE NOT FOUND AT THAT LINK
Research banner Pages …
Preclinical Quality of Life Page:
REFERENCE at bottom:
https://doi.org/10.1016/j.critrevonc.2013.01.004
goes to : Approval probabilities and regulatory review patterns for anticancer drugs in the European Union SEE ABOVE re which APA format
2025 Survey Page :
First paragraph: https:// not linked ?????
Table of Contents at bottom of page: Are the asterisks necessary? There is nothing below to explain their use. If denoting the 100%, perhaps use a highlight. I don’t see this.?????
Costs & Effectiveness page:
Second chart: Should the title be “Can Estradiol GET…” or “Can Estradiol Gel…” CHANGED
Third chart: Title: Get to Gel CHANGED
Fifth chart: Missing ‘A’ in second word “Which re the Cheapest Brands of E2 Patches?” in title. CHANGED
Admin Consideration Page:
1/4 down : following the official patch protocol…”he PATCH study, the aim was to keep the serum E2 level between 250 -2000 pmol/L (70 – 580…” missing In t CHANGED
I assume that none of the web links listed on this page are to go anywhere because they do not. I have activated everything that looks like a link, but I have not verified that each link works or that it links to the correct page.
Using tE-2 to Treat Osteoporosis… page:
All OK – clear. GOOD
Using Transdermal Estradiol to… page:
Many instances on page of tE2 being changed to E2 in various paragraphs. I think that the context is correct, E2 is used appropriately.
Below the second graph; 2nd paragraph; 2nd line “greaterthan the normal…” : need space between greater than. CHANGED
Next chart : Title: E2 change to tE2 ?????
Two lines above ‘Men on ADT using tE2 gel … chart : “hot flash severity score” all letters are bold but for the ‘s’ in severity. CHANGED
Glossary Page:
Diabetes: “A group of endocrine diseases…” CHANGED
PSMA Agents: : …”(Prostate specific membrane antigen) is molecule on” … “is a molecule on” CHANGED
Schellhammer Urologic Research Foundation : https:// does not link. CHANGED